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Lauren112285

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« on: July 08, 2006, 06:53:00 pm »
Oh wow!  That is really good...from experience?
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WhisperedFlame

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« Reply #1 on: July 19, 2006, 04:23:00 pm »
thank you
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« Reply #2 on: August 03, 2006, 01:56:00 pm »
i think everyone gets hurt like that by their parents or someone close at some point. and it sucks, but just keep letting it out and it feels so much better
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« Reply #3 on: August 08, 2006, 10:03:00 pm »
Writing will never make the emotional pain go away, I get hurt usually every day by my father, writing is what keeps me from cutting and burning.
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« Reply #4 on: July 08, 2006, 05:24:00 pm »
My heart so full with aching
My eyes burning with dried tears
My skin hot from staying outside
Telling him something\'s wrong
Only to be yelled at harshly
For something I didn\'t even do
Why I\'m surprised from his outrage
Shouldn\'t have surprised m6e
As much as it did
Words yelled at me
When I did nohing wrong
Is something I\'ve always received
From him
Laying in bed i let my tears out fully
To stream hard down my face
Still not tough enough
From the verbal beatings given
Each word a lash at my heart
The harsher tone a trigger for tears
My dad himself
Helping to bring my depression
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« Reply #5 on: July 08, 2006, 08:24:00 pm »
good poem i liked reading it  i going out of town see everyone next month  
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« Reply #6 on: July 10, 2006, 04:41:00 pm »
yes, from experience, a feeling, emotion, thought, just like all of my other poems
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« Reply #7 on: July 11, 2006, 03:34:00 pm »
Pretty.  I\'m sorry you have to go through this too...

You express beautifully.
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« Reply #8 on: July 12, 2006, 11:42:00 pm »
Yipes! This one just hit a little too close to home... VERY nice poem... i can completely relate, and you very eloquently expressed the feelings i know only too well... If only people could realize just how much their words can hurt sometimes... *sigh*
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